This week in Literacy we are learning about persuasive writing.
How would you persuade Miss Houstoun that we should be able to have an extra playtime in the afternoon? Remember to think of all the benefits of being able to play outside!
miss Houston please can 3jh have a swimming pool on the field we will make sure that it is safe and the water is warm and please can we have a slide it will be fun.
Miss Houston please can we have extra play time because:we could get more excersise,finish our games.
ReplyDeletemiss Housten please can we get a swimming pool so after school we can have a swimming lesson and you get more money from it.
ReplyDeleteWays to persuade:
ReplyDeleteemfisize words e.g pleeeeeease
pretend to cry
bribe them e.g gifts
good reasons why
My persuasion:
Me: Miss Houston,you know your the best head teacher
Miss: I know
Me: so can you buy us a pool to show that your a good teacher
Miss
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ReplyDeletemiss Houston please can 3jh have a swimming pool on the field we will make sure that it is safe and the water is warm and please can we have a slide it will be fun.
ReplyDeletePleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaseeee can we have extra play time.I will by you wonderful equiment.
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